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  • Annie Finch on the free verse line

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    Posted on February 10th, 2009sherryMagazines, Poetics, Poets

    From Annie Finch’s Grails and Legacies: Thoughts on the Line in Contemporary Poetry Review:”

    Poets like to muse about the free verse line—how and whether a particular line has “weight,” a “justification,” an “identity,” or any one of the numerous quasi-mystical terms we use for that indescribable quality of “thisness” that a good line of free verse exudes. But the next time you hear someone in a workshop remarking on how good a particular free-verse line or passage sounds, scan it. The odds are that it will fall into a regular metrical pattern. If free-verse poets were educated about meter again (as the great free verse poets of the early twentieth century always were) and meter became a more conscious part of such discussions, the mysticism would sound less subjective and futile and the quest for the true essence of “the line” would likely become, if not more fun, at least quite a bit less stressful.

    No matter what other factors go into a successful free verse line—imagery, syntax, a center of meaning or wit—rhythmic energy is the sine qua non. Most good free verse passages have a metrical (by which I mean a regularly and predictably rhythmical) subtext. The best free verse is alert and conscious of this energy, able to keep its head above the rhythmical water—a feat which takes a certain amount of ear-training in meter (not only iambic meter).

    In my odyssey, such as it is, as a poet I have found what Finch says here to be true. Whether one has any intention of writing formal verse, a grounding in metrics pays off in a livelier line.

    Finch also goes on to defend the visual effect of line breaks in free verse, and as always I recommend that you read all of the original. Still, for me, poetry is an aural, not (just) a visual, art.

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